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Re: JP's reviews.
Hello, If you have the time, could you review my first chapter of my romance novel? I'm aiming to get published and any feedback would be helpful. Thank you! Here's ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go - Chapter One
This is amazing! I was hooked as soon as I finished reading the first sentence. The first paragraph really grabbed my attention and held it till the very end which ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: I'm In Love With A Sick Bastard
He smirked, pulling me into the window and nuzzling nuzzled my neck. "Ah nothing Beth. Just get your cute butt in the car." I smiled, gushing at the fact that ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Iceprincess's Royal Reviews :D [Currently accepting!]
Hello Iceprincess, Can you review my first chapter of "Sealed by Fire" and if you have time, the second chapter? Just so you know, it's a romance novel. Here's the ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Sealed by Fire- Chapter Two
Ramsay couldn’t believe what he heard. Had he heard right? Just to make sure, he had Wolfe repeat. Wolfe gladly obliged and laughed some more at the disbelieving look Ramsay ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: I miss him
Hello! First off, I really liked your story! The way you described your character's pain, was wonderful. It made me feel like I was the one experiencing it which isn't ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Sealed by Fire
Hi, First off, thank you so much for reviewing! I was a little bit hesitant to post at first but I'm glad I did :) For the battle scene, I ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Sealed by Fire
A/N: This is the second draft. After re-working it for about a week, I think I finally got it right. Much thanks to JP for pointing out my mistakes and ...
Aug 15, 2011
