Litehawk

The devil's image forms in my mind, As he commandeers my thoughts. My endless resistance proves to be futile, As I willingly do what he's sought. - In the end ...

When our love has died, And all hope is lost, Let me find peace in your arms. My life's been invested in your simple smile, Please help keep my heart ...

Killing the sun and stopping the glow, The moon plots her jealous revenge. Venus and mars cannot intervene, Both busy battling a friend. -  And Jupiter can't seem to regulate ...

The summer has lately gotten colder, And the winter is shockingly warm, And autumn gets a little bit brighter, And spring without one single storm. - The Earth's mood must ...

I want to be real, I want to be there.  I want to be with you, I want you to care. - And if I'm not still here, When tomorrow ...

Pen and paper camera and film references my wishes to be able to record everything she and I said and did, to look back.. For signs that my feelings might ...

Pen and paper, camera and film, I'd love to be able to keep it all. Look back to solve all of the mysteries  That ultimately decide my final call. - ...

I think what Timmy meant was that he wante to see how his death would affect others but he wouldn't be able to find out because he'd be dead, so ...

This had absolutely nothing to do with chaos theory at all. Which disappointed me, such a misleading title.

Your syllable counts are really off, you have a lot of flow problems. Poetry isn't just throwing a jumble of words together and rhyming, you gotta make it sound good

Rhyming seems forced, choppy on some parts, you lose your formality sometimes. You should spend some quality time reading this out loud

A bigger impact was needed prior to this

I've written 100 poems. Not all of them are here. I just wanted to convey the power. Hint: ask yourself, why did he say that? Was he giving up because ...

I'm done (No this is not spam, it's simply a strong statement that I hope conveys something to you. It is a poem, not something that should be in a ...

Thanks guys, it's just been so hard to write lately, I don't know why.