LisaMCooper

In the beginning of the New World, there were only two creatures. Two dragons. Kalashein, Goddess of the Moon. And Morako, God of the Sun. The pair were lonely in ...

Wow. Really, really good. I would never be able to come with something like that. ^^ Most of what I would say has already been said. But, I will say ...

Beautiful! I like your style of writing. There's not much I can say that hasn't already been said though. But, I do agree with Rosey Unicorn and ANate145. Maybe tone ...

O.O I see everyone has already pointed out grammatical and spelling errors so I don't need to. But otherwise, I like it. Maybe fix a few things up here and ...