LisaMCooper

I chose other, because I have so many stories I'm working on right now. I mean, its not even funny how many things I'm trying to work on and expand ...

lol. I think right now you are my most faithful reader. Which is yay! ^^ lol. I'll work on Rebecca's story. I need to copy this one to word or ...

Note: This Alicia's story. I hope I get this right. This will be the third time I've tried to write it. ~*:Painting Love:*~ Walking slowly, Alicia hummed along to the ...

I don't know why people had problems with this. I thought it was brilliant. Of course, I can understand most anything if I put my mind to it. Brilliant work ...

Hiya! ^^ My name's Lisa and I would like to leave you a review. Okay. Your story was a bit confusing. But that's alright. I do that too. Also, there ...

There is going to be a second one, set in the suburbs. This first one is set in the city. I'm having more trouble writing the second one that the ...

Note: This is rated R because of the dream scene. Critique and tear it up as much as you want. I am eager to hear what you think. :D ~*::*~ ...

I say wow and congrats on your courage to post this. I don't understand why so many people are getting upset. You already said you didn't want to offend anybody, ...

Oooooo!! Will you critique my story, Carnelian? It is in Historical fiction. I would very much appreciate it if you would. Thank you so much. ^^ -Lisa M. Cooper

Hi, I've been reading your fanfiction. And I like it. I noticed in some of the earlier chapters, there were a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. But hey, we ...

Eeee! ^^ Thank you to everyone who critiqued and gave their opinions on my story (or what there is of it). I'm glad you all think its good. But again, ...

Thank you all for your reviews. ^^

Chapter One has been revised and will be posted as a new topic.

Wow. I really liked this. Your sentences flow really nicely and you get in enough description for good imagery. A few grammatical errors, but nothing major. Plus, I believe (and ...

Okay. I myself, got really confused. For one thing, when you wrote the rape scene, you should have clarified that it was a vision. Why? Well, when I first read ...