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Re: Lightning
Sorry. But because I have joined HubPages, I must remove my works from any other site they show up on. If you would like to read any of my works ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Locket
i hope to collect lockets. But about the poem or whatever you call it. Amazing i like the soul of it. Did that happen to you not to be a ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: The Place
I'm not entirely sure if this is in the right place or not. So please forgive me if I've posted in the wrong sub-forum. The place, Special to me, Is ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: The Locket
I'm not entirely sure if this is in the right place or not. So please forgive me if I've posted in the wrong sub-forum. A sign, Of love and hope. ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Balance - Chapter Two :: Cold
If you are allergic to "ZukoxKatara or Zutaran" type stories [Steamy/waterxfire]. The whole story has a sort of "Zutaran" theme but not really. Because its mine. And its more fun. ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Blue Blood Waters
Hullo! *waves* I really liked this and the way you wrote it. I would love to read more and while there isn't much I found that might need editing or ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Dragon Story
Note: OLD! I will probably never finish this, but I would still like it to be critiqued and see what everyone else thinks of it. And please, tear it to ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Attention
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this piece. My opinion from what I could stand to read was this was Angst, not even constructive, or well written just a ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Attention
This was a beutiful poem to read! I actually sang it over and over again, placing a slow, almost mournful tune to it. Did you ever consider making it a ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Attention
Loved it! I especially loved the end of the second to last stanza, it makes it so much sadder. I do think the rest of it is terribly much like ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Attention
Attention I’m trying to keep a hold of my emotions, I think you should leave out the "a hold" and just say, your trying to hold on to your emotions ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Attention
Attention I’m trying to keep a hold of my emotions, But all I want to do, Is break down and cry. I can’t tell you what I’m feeling, I can’t ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
I remember writing this when I was twelve. :)) Shadowed Girl I’m a shadowed girl-- Too timid to show all that I’ve got Too shy to let them know me ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: The Midnight Wolf
I liked it and thought it was quite interesting. No mistakes found and I hope you do write more, as I would like to read more of your writings. You ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: This World We So Love
Author: Lisa Cooper Written: Saturday, March 29, 2008 Title: The World We So Love -- So... Besides telling you that I wrote this on a whim one day, there's really ...
Nov 5, 2010
