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Hiya! Just thought I tell you that I did read Chapter one, even if I didn't review it. :D Here ae my nitpicks. She had counted her spot-lights a million ...

Number two is wonderful! I loved it so much! Good job! I'm in another nitpicking mood, so here we go. A man, somewhere between twenty-six and twenty-eight (I could never ...

Aw....that was so sad! I loved it, truly. Amazing. I believe this is for Clo's contest? :wink: “Now, look at what you’ve done!” Mommy screams at on e of the ...

Hey! I liked reading this a lot. Good job with description; I could see everything, which is pretty awesome. Here are a few nitpicks. Really, I don=t even know what ...

Yeah, people still beat me here. But I still liked it! Filler chapters, ftw. But then, his eyes lingered at the spot where I stood before turning away. Uh...yeah...weird sentence. ...

Hello! I thought this was really good, especially for a prelude. It gives some background information that is probably important. But I'm in a nitpicking mood today, so let's get ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS!! I'm Cat and I'll be reviewing this, which I have to say, was really good! I enjoyed reading this very much. Here are a few ...

I really liked this part! Good job! You described the crash scene really well. A few nitpicks as well. As he lay down i n bed , he was more ...

Hi Jamie! I really enjoyed reading this! Good job! I'm in a nit-picking mood too, so here we go. The scream broke off with a gurgling , choked sound as ...

I am still lazy. >.< I liked this chapter! Except for the fact that it was in 3rd person point of view. You have done all the rest in first ...

I've been feeling lazy lately so I haven't really been reviewing much of your stuff. Really lazy. Anyway... It was hard to believe that Nathaniel Peyton would be fifteen this ...

Man, I liked this a lot! I was so caught up in it that I didn't pay attention to any of the grammar mistakes. (bad on my part :D ). ...

ZOMG. What type of friend am I? Not to have reviewed this yet. First, I went cuckcoo when I read about the triplets and Helen in that middle-ish part. Are ...

Hi Kat! Here is your review you requested. :D I was too absorbed in my quest of what to wear, I lost track of time. That sentence sounds weird. It ...

Ah well. I have yet to be killed, but it is good again. :D I cannot wait for the next one! My boiling anger steamed out through my fists and ...