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Re: Before the Moon
Hi there, darling! :D “Nat, you can’t seriously be carrying that everywhere with you,” I said to my best friend. Nat, who had a massive fear of vampires, was wearing ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Won't Go Home Without You (temporary title) - Andy Samberg
OMG, Andy Samberg! > Thoughts :arrow: So, I thought this is nice beginning to this idea you have. You are definitely hinting on some conflict here (lots and lots, yes!). ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Emma-Claire
Sarah sarah sarah...how many times have I read this story? Too many. Anyway... Snow fell quietly, the New York sky began to light as I looked around. Because I'm a ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Out of Reach [2]
Kat!! :D I’m here to review, darling! We reached the door, and by this time the crowd was making it impossible to quickly reach the other side. “And yours?” “I’ll ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Fata Morgana
Hi hero! Welcome to YWS, the best website on the internet to learn how to write gooder. :wink: The girl was standing at the edge of the gray and green ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Blades and Bargains Pt III
Mister Rice! The last part! :D “I still like to be completely honest with those I deal with,” the one called Kylan said. I know that this is correct, but ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Blades and Bargains pt II
Mister Rice! I'm back again! Amarian was silent for a moment. At last, he nodded his head. “If you will it.” So, pretty much everything else is really good. But ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Blades and Bargains
Mister Rice! June was right; all you write about are centaurs. :P His face was wrapped in strips of black cloth, and he wore brown leather everywhere else. So....can he ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Carouselia
Hi Conrad! I'll review this here, so I just don't say everything to you in MSN. Tehe. :D But, wasn’t this magic? She had wanted something magical. And she had ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Resentment 2 and part of 3
Back again, darling. I probably won't finish the review today, but I will tomorrow! :D the 11 year old child Even though you don't have to, I think it would ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Resentment
Hi darling! :D You request, I come. M'kay, I know Aushy kinda already went over this, but I see it again still. " Nothing I give the little missus will ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: ......At the Gate
Hi there! :D Okay, it's kind of hard for the readers to be able to understand this story. It's all jumbled up and smashed together, making it not impossible, but ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: my curse
Hi Silented! Welcome to YWS, the best writing website on the internet. :D You get my 200th review! I like the idea you had for this poem, the story behind ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Caught on the Wind--Chapter 1
Kat! I don't think I have read much of your stuff, which is very very bad of me. Very bad. But I am here now, which is good! :D I ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: An Absence of Rose
Hi Evi! I think I'm going to end up reviewing all your stories for Cal's contest, aren't I? :D But you are an epic writer and I just love reading ...
May 28, 2009
