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It was good. Very good, I liked it. Now, getting down to business. When I first starting reading this, and I read about the pack, I thought "Oh, cool. Werewolves. ...

I think it was really good. :D It flowed smoothly and was a really good prolouge. I bet you have a really good ideas for this, so I can't wait ...

Thank you! Sometimes, these poems are the only things that kept me from losing it. Thank you again! :D

Hey. That was good!! I am not really that good of a editor. so I will try my best! :D Many times in the first part, you capitalized sub . ...

I wrote this when I was going through some hard times during school. I wrote a lot of poems during this time, and all of my friends think this was ...

Alright, I stink at editing. The only things I can really catch while reading a story, is if an obvious word is spelled wrong. Trust me, I do it in ...

That was pretty good, peanut for your first time. Lol, yeah. it might be a good idea to slow it down a bit when you edit it. Yes, I finally ...

Thanks everyone. I know alot of you guys (I was about to y'all, but that's not really proper) said I need to add more description. As I re-read the story ...

I like it. I don't know if you meant this, but I noticed you didn't reveal much about the characters and keeping alot of it a mystery. It sets up ...

Okay, this is my first story to submit, so please critque!! :D I am totally new at this!! I hope you enjoy. [b]Page 1 The harsh wind blew all around ...