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Hey, I got to read this again only with some changes that did make it better. When did Alla get red hair? Never mind................ Bunch of typos that you will ...

Thats a hard one. I actually don't know anyone who is gay. Strike that. I don't know anyone who is close to me is gay. So I really don't know ...

Hey Em, its your friendly neighborhood Cat. Welcome to YWS!! First thing, you need to review two different posts before you can post anything else. It is one of the ...

I will tell you first off that I am not very good at grammar editing, so I will leave that for someone else. That was really good though! Good description ...

Bush declared war on Terriorism, not on Iraq. At least I think. Thats what my Social Studies teacher told me. If I am wrong, blame him. We aren't fighting a ...

The war in my opinion, was not a stupid stunt. If we had not declared war, they would have attacked again. Same right now. If we bring back our troups, ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews. What I got from all of that was, I need more description. Still. I will try editing it soon. I've been working on Ch. 1 ...

My dad told me to shut up, because it's late and I was laughing so loud, it woke up my little brother. That was the funniest thing since my best ...

Ok, first off, Kaylyn, I stink at editing. But, I liked this poem, so I just had to review. That was really good. The description and the way you worded ...

Thank you, WrittenSoul and Kaylyn. I really needed more opinions on this, cuz just having peanut at school read it doesn't really help. I will try making it clearer, and ...

I liked it. I agree totally with the post before me. Just right for the introduction. I can't wait to see what you do with this!!! :D

Alright, first off, I am going to tell you that I am not that good of an editor. But I will try the best I can :D First off, I ...

This is a prolouge to this great idea I have been writing. Please critique! This is sixth time edited. :D ********************************************************* Her heart was going a million miles

I have been waiting all day to read this, and it ends up that I already have. Nice job, peanut. One thing I noticed, is that when you did this. ...

There comes a time in everyone's life that you love someone, but you don't know why. And the way you described it, was great. It was really good! It stayed ...