Linx

Hiya! I liked this! THis is going to be good! :D Sometimes I get pissed off enough to procure some kind of revenge. But usually I just spit into the ...

I liked this! *claps eagerly like a little girl* Pretty, pretty!! Now, I looked at the title and at the poem and think, "But they don't go together?" It might ...

I liked this too! Despite the 2:1 thing, this was good!! It was strong and powerful. This is one thing though that confused me a bit: Her eyes were clouded ...

Ooooh. I like this! It was a bit gross, and I agree with BBB (man, I still want to say Jared). That line was a little bit tricky to understand. ...

Ok, this was good! :D Probably a little more desciption wouldn't hurt. Like, where are they? Are they in a field? Where is the field? Stuff like that. She wondered ...

That was sooooo sweet! :D Loved it. Also, you are a new member to YWS. So, Hello! Since you are new, you might not know about are rules. You need ...

I'm back! :D Since you said you needed help on the English, I'll help you then! (I don't hate guys but they're extinguish my patience, with they're stupid jokes) That ...

I like this! This sounds good!! First off, you need to capitalize some of your I's in this post. And the beginnings of some sentences. I'm 1,68 cm high Ok, ...

Ok, I think they got everything before me, but I have a question. What are the // for? Are they to seperate the paragraphs or what? It might be just ...

Ok. I just read these for the first time, and it is like I am in love again with Twilight. When you talked about Leah and Seth in Jacob's pack, ...

Well, I could just do Kelly. I get what you mean though. It justs seems like you need some help here, and I'll be glad too.

Yay *claps again* I know you would do good Meep, you just have low self-esteem. I hope we rose it!! :D "Jeez. She's already using the plural form. We this, ...

Yes, yes, YES!! I have been waiting for 42 hours to read this. YES! Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!! :D I think you spelled yogurt wrong. I think. I ...

Huh? *starts to cry too* You had to sell Roxie? I didn't know that. But didin't you just get her this past spring? Oh well. *cries* This was beautiful, truly ...

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