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I've never read Midsummer Night's Dream before. Now you made me want to read it! :D Okay, this was interesting. I liked it. You let us know some things about ...

I liked it. You took the words out of my head, because I have been thinking about forbidden love for a while. It was pretty. Sunsets on the shining water ...

Kelly: Kelly made a face as she listened to Ryder. "Ugh," she retorted. "A pig? Gross!" Everyone laughed, and Ryder pulled her to his lap. "Yep." *sorry. That's all I ...

Hiya! This is a good job, Reuben. The only things I caught were some dialouge problems and capitalization. Here we go: "Stop. Follow me." [b]Comma not a period. Then the ...

YES!! *punches her fist in the air* Yes, yes, YES!! :D :D :D Here are the good things. I saw no errors. I told you that you wouldn't disappoint me. ...

It's a done deal. I am not writing anymore on this (at least, at the moment) cooldude19967 said: The onew critisim I noticed that really distracted me was this, you ...

Thanks to Meep:) for telling me what genre to put this in, and thanks to Abs, my friend at school. She helped me with this. :D Edited once. Here it ...

I, like, know no one besides few on here. So, after reading this, I got a bit more confused. Pretty much, I was saying, "WHAT?" But still, it was hilariously ...

I'm back! :D Now lets get started! "What?" Elvy asked. "You can't know that....how could you know?" You can change the period after asked to a comma, then move this ...

Ooooh. Creepy! *shudders* I have to say that so far, this is your best post. There were few mistakes, and it made sense! "I think only Dran knows now," Period ...

Hiya again! I am not going to go into as much detail as I did the other posts. You didn't capitalized some beginnings of some sentences. Then, you capitalized some ...

I bet you love seeing me now! :D Barr began. "We have with no doubt postponed this for far to long. We ride out today," At the end there, replace ...

Hiya! I am back! :D First off, good again! You are developing this very nicely. :D Now on to the crits! Elvy dreamed to learn to ride a horse, but ...

Gosh, I hate to crit this after you have edited this about a million times. :? But I only found one thing!! :D "So...what you suggest is to venture deep ...

I liked this. It was pretty, and I can relate to it. :D It would be nice if it was a song too. For the poem part though, a little ...