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Re: Unwilling Kiss
Awwwwww...... *cries* I think I am the only person in the world that has not read Romeo and Juliet. Now you make me want to read it. They both had ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the Hills - Chapter 8
Yes! *punches her fist in the air* Good job Reuben. Best chapter yet (yet, I say yet). "Which way were we going yesterday?" Elvy asked. After a few seconds of ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: A Broken Promise.
Awwwww... It was beautiful Kaylyn! I loved it! You strucked me in awe with your poems again! :D My trust in you has gone Like the shooting star above. Why? ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the hills-Chapter 7
Ok, no one saw it. Oh well. I am back after a wonderful break of sleeping twelve hours a day, for five days. :D Several thoughts flew Ro's mind. I ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Right or wrong?
I love reading this. It's a sad scene, and you clearly showed it. Good job! I did notice a couple of errors. “I understand why you’re doing it you need ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Divorce
Did I not tell you about the rules? *sighs* The 2:1 policy. I guess I will tell you tomorrow at school. *sighs again* This was really short. Maybe you should ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Hopeless
I would like to see you expand on why he loves her and likes you so we can get a better understanding of why this guy is having such a ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Hopeless
Welcome to YWS, girl. I'm glad you joined, since you have heard Peanut and I talking about it all the time. With Leapy pointing out all the typos, I say, ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the hills-Chapter 7
Give me a day to review this Reuben. I feel like crap right now, and I probably wouldn't be able to edit well. Sorry dude. :( I will do this, ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Playing The Field - Epilogue
Yup, I purposely put that birthday, As a thanks for your help! *stares in awe at the computer* AWWWWW!! Thank you! I am so deeply honored. Oh, now I am ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Music In Me - Chapter 2
Sweet Meep:)! You have created another masterpiece. :D “Very funny.” I snap, irate. I had to look up that word. It really doesn't sound right there. Maybe irritated would be ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: untitled
I'm so proud of you Peanut. *cries softly and sniffles* Almost no mistakes, and nicely written. This is what you have been hiding from me for the past TWO WEEKS! ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Music In Me - Chapter 1
How dare you say you aren't good Meep. I thought we already took care of the self-esteem problems. :D Anyway, I think you are still basing this on American high ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Adrift
Kelly: Kelly sighed as she listened to the adults talk about what they are going to do. She stood up and walked next to Mary Anne. She sat down and ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Playing The Field - Epilogue
Birthday: 14 March That's my birthday! *claps happily* Coolieo!! :D I can't wait, I can't wait! *laughs and dances around joyfully* So, can I say again that I like this ...
Nov 19, 2008
