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Yay! *claps* Good job, Meep! I've been waiting and you give me something incredible. Once again, I was the geeky, bespectacled little kid with two silly ponytails on each side ...

You told me to come, just like you asked Snoink, so here I am. Since you also said this was your first time writing in first person, I thought that ...

That was a piece of art. I loved it, even the gross part. Countless days and nights at sea followed, the crew did not touch the meat of the golden ...

This was really beautiful, Em. Gold star. :D I agree with WaterVapor on the punctuation. It's not consistent, and it needs to be. If you don't, it will confuse people ...

Warning: This is true and random. Critique at will (please do). ___________________________ I drew a smiley on my knee, because life needed happier things. My knee looked so plain, and ...

Life, a strange thing. Many people think, what is it, exactly? Tragedy strikes, crying people all over. Is that what life is? Grief and trouble? Daggers and guns, stabs and ...

That's just like *writewatiwant* to review here before me. Oh well. :D Good job, again and gold star! She's an eigth-grade disaster, and a pure theif. Yet, she makes me ...

That *sniff* was *sniff* beautiful! I loved it. The last thing I need is a ruined friendship. Please don't let it get in the way of the feelings you kept. ...

Aw... that was so beautiful and sad, Bailey! Loved it, and gold star! It's bad enough you don't care. You broke my heart in pieces for all the more to ...

Ah! My name is not Catlin. (sheesh Peanut!) Anyway... In my head, a boy I see. But in my dreams, he's next to me. I'm going against what always said. ...

Ah, Bailey... *crying* That was so sweet and so sad. Beautiful, beautiful. I give you a gold star. I'm sorry that you'r a pig, can't stay with one girl. I ...

Welcome to YWS! Alright Blackman, here we go. First off, seperating the dialogue would help. Having all the different people talking in the same paragraph is confusing. Everytime you start ...

Blackman is right. Very, very right. For most average nine-year olds, Christmas is the highlight of the year. It's supposed to be from a nine-year old's point of view. Huh? ...

Sorry guys. Now that I re-read it, it is a funny joke Nate. :D Peanut said she read it before you posted the reply, but she didn't reply. She could ...

No. I just started going out with him less than 12 hours ago. Now I am regretting it, and how am I supposed to break up with someone after you've ...