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Re: YWS listed among 20 great sites for begining writers
It should be number one. :D
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Re: First Kiss, edit
HaHa. Funny :D Normally, the first was an annoyance and the second didn’t matter. This sentence did not make sense to me in the spot it was. What is she ...
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Re: Candles on the Water
Name- Chase Appearance- Medium length Blonde hair, 5'6'', green eyes, athletic. History- His parents had always made him busy with many different things. Clubs, sports, extra activities, and lots of ...
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Re: USA's Best President
Thomas Jefferson- He is the reason why our country is as large as it is today. He bought the Louisana Territory by himself. He didn't ask congress or nothing. He ...
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Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, a small group of humans went to Moon instead of Mars.
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Re: The End
You finished it! *runs and hugs you* This was an amazing ending, and now I'm so freaked out that I don't think I'll be able to sleep tonight. Oh man, ...
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Re: Stop!
The background on my phone is MC Hammer now, thanks to y'all. :D
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Re: To Dream The Dreams of Others
My first attempt at writing lyrrics. This is for BBB's contest. Mysteries of others can seem so vast and strange. Their feelings and their thoughts; a charade that's due to ...
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Re: To Start Anew
*claps* Hi and welcome to YWS! This was a good piece for your first one to post. I loved it. One thing confused me throughout the whole poem, was that ...
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Re: Ancestral Home
This was pretty short, so it was kind of hard to critique. But, nevertheless... The mother screamed, and her husband's progenitors scowled down at her from their gilded frames. The ...
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Re: Swallow Me Forever
Wow. The meaning was powerful. I love the way you made the ocean a part of it. I see her sitting there Upon that rock every day I keep wondering ...
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Re: Report a good member!
When you go back over the list, you don't have many more people to mention because most of them have already been mention. Meep(: - For always being there and ...
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Re: Beyond the Hills - Chapter 11
Woah. No grammar mistakes that I saw. Awesome Reuben. I saw a typo or two, but everyone has those. Just make sure to still go over your work before you ...
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Re: Beyond the Hills - Chapter 10
Very well written, I congratulate you. Truly. We are getting to the good parts of the story. Grammar-wise, uh...you had numerous mistakes. Some things were not capitalized again, so you ...
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Re: Beyond the Hills - Chapter 9
Zomg!! :shock: No one has reviewed this for the past month. Wow. Well, that's why I am here. On the ship comma here Rachel could see there was a great ...
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