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I thought this was a good idea and that you should do more with this. One question though. Is this all the first chapter if you are going to write ...

I think.... Peanut and I have had four people join from our school, so that's six of us. If we each get on about 5 times a day, will our ...

Awesome. ^_^ Can you find out how many more (or less) people joined YWS in 2008 than in 2007? Like _____ amount of people joined in 2008 and ______ amount ...

Gah. :shock: You suprised me. Wow. What you said at the beginning made no sense to me. Part of it was in Nate's POV in first person. The middle part ...

HaHa. That end part did sound familiar. ^_^ I glanced at my timetable, Biology was next. The comma there doesn't fit. Maybe change it to a semi colon? It would ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS. As Sakura was saying before, you need to make sure you do two reviews before you post anything of your own. That and many other ...

Meep's do to list #2- Write. Okay, here we go. I cleared my throat nervously, “My name is Melody Petrina Keyes. I was a librarian in Velentia Junior High.” Psst. ...

Aw. Good job. A couple of things I saw: I wanted nothing more, but to miss school today. You can take out that comma. You are only suppose to put ...

Good job beemarie. Just a couple of things... In it she was being chased by a masked man in an alley shouting something she couldn’t decipher and telling her, to ...

Firestarter wrote this. Nate, I'm worried by the fact you ever thought Vanilla Ice was remotely cool ... :D

Gah, I hate to say it, but look at the facts. The terriorists bombed the World Trade towers early in George Bush's term. To say, "Fear us!" They might do ...

This was the only music my parents let me listen to for years, so I know almost everyone in the genre. Most of the ones that are listed are more ...

Alright beemarie. I liked this, but there were a couple of things I saw. Placing the door closed-or semi closed due to the damage, Remy headed towards the only door ...

Alright here. Some things I saw, so lets get started. There were a lot of spelling typos throughout this whole piece. A good idea is to read over a piece ...

HaHa. Ok, not as much humor in this piece but oh well. I sat down, flustered. Opening my biology textbook, I continued reading up about cell mitosis. One, she continued ...