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Nate, you've done it again. Another random thing. Hence the forum name, Randomness. :D When I first saw this, I thought of the Gwen Stefani song, when she spells bananas. ...

The funny thing is, that we talked about that in Sunday School a couple of weeks ago. And I go to a CP church. (the other church. Not the catholic) ...

Chase Everyone was either hurt or helping the hurt ones. Chase walked back to the girl that he had been carrying. He had to put her down after he got ...

***It's fine. I'm going to use other people's too*** Chase Chase held the girl in his arms as they went off in the forest again, this time with the guy ...

That was so sweet. I loved it! I have to admit though, it was short. Of last year, my senior year of college, I had planned on giving Summer the ...

:shock: Oooh. I see that you put redo, but I haven't read the first one I believe. I like this though. It was a bit short, so it is harder ...

Hey! I liked this chapter. Good job! ^_^ At exactly three o’clock, I went over to the school’s library to meet Jasper. You don't need over in that sentence. There ...

Ok, I thought it was good. It happened awfully fast though. Maybe spread it out a bit? But I liked it overall. Now onto grammar mistakes. “How am I supposed ...

I live in the U.S. and my grade throughout the whole state is, they say, the best group of kids that they have ever seen. So because of that, they ...

Chase It was getting darker as Chase and the girl wandered through the forest, trying to find the missing girl. They didn't talk at all; they just walked. "So...." Chase ...

Chase THey had kept on walking for a while after the girl suddenly ran off. It had begun to turn dark as the sun slowly disappeared from the trees. Finally, ...

Ok, this is my first piece of work in a while that I thought was pretty decent. My writing has been pretty bad lately, so please critique and tell me ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! One of the rules here on YWS is to make sure you do two reviews before you post anything of your own. Since you are ...

Chase It felt like world was coming to a end, or sort of. My parents were gone and these other kids' parents were gone too. It was very weird. And ...

Because there were 27 people who made up the letters and no one liked the 27th one, so they kicked him out. What's the point of volcanos?