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***I think they got out of order*** Chase Everyone went back to the hotel. Chase was carrying a unconscious Emily and Ballow and Jake were helping John. "Hurry up. Get ...

Chase "I see them!" Kate yelled. Emily was up at the surface with John and a girl. Ballow and Chase swam over and helped them to the shore. "Don't tell ...

Chase "Woohoo!" Jake yelled, jumping onto the bed. The girls sitting on the bed screamed and moved out of the way. Melpomene was actually giving them a break. First break ...

Chase "Emily!" Everyone screamed and Chase turned around. Emily was lying on the grass, Melpomene standing above her. Chase ran forward along with everyone else. "Are you okay?" he asked, ...

HaHa. Good job with the volleyball description. I've read a lot of things that tried involving volleyball, but they described it wrong. You did it right! Good job! I couldn't ...

Chase Everyone seemed to be yelling at once. It was loud and noisy, and Chase couldn't concentrate. "Guys, shut up!" He yelled, silencing them all. "What's with the mood change?" ...

Chase "Yes, it's possible," Melpomene, shocked as well. "Then where the flip could she be?" Chase asked, yellling now. "Chase, calm down," Abi said, standing up now.

Chase "Urgh!" Abi exclaimed as she failed again. "Why can't I do this?" "Calm down," Melpomene said. "It takes a while. Why don't you sit down for a minute." Abi's ...

HaHa. Good job! I really liked this. There were a couple of things throughout here that I want to point out. “Mam.” I bobbed my head towards his date. Mam ...

I never wrote much until about two years ago when I wrote my first poem. I was in 5th grade, which means I was 11 years old. I wrote a ...

I liked this a lot! I felt exactly what she was feeling. The time you leave the nest and go off to college. Good job! Some things I saw: In ...

Chase "So what happened?" Ballow asked, ignoring John now. "One of those plague things," Ellie replied. "It was coming towards us. Emily saw it first. She was the one who ...

Wow. This was really good. I enjoyed reading this very much. I laughed about a million times while I was reading this. Good job! If I were to die, and ...

Oh, two days later.... Some parts in here confused me because you put them speaking on the next line, and you didn't say that they were. For example: I sat ...