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Re: Elven Kiss
Hiya and welcome to YWS!! I'm Cat and I'll be reviewing this, which I have to say, was really good! I enjoyed reading this very much. Here are a few ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
Chase Shush, it's okay Emily. Calm down. He wanted desperately to jump up from his bed and run to Emily to comfort her. He wanted to do something, but it ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Leap year birthday boy/girls
I know someone who was born on February 29. He is a really awesome guy, and he is kind of old. He just celebrates his birthday on the 1st.
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
Chase Emily? Emily could hear him in her head, but she was staring at her mom. Emily, girl.... "It's my mom," she whispered, then started moving towards her.
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: A Laugh
Haha! Since we are already in the political jokes.... Ah...those aren't that funny. George Bush, get out of the way. Here come the lolcats!
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The Love Note ch. 2
I really liked this part! Good job! You described the crash scene really well. A few nitpicks as well. As he lay down i n bed , he was more ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The Love Note preface and ch. 1
Hi Jamie! I really enjoyed reading this! Good job! I'm in a nit-picking mood too, so here we go. The scream broke off with a gurgling , choked sound as ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
Chase Golly, what the flip... "Will you stop cursing in my head!" Abi yelled out. You can't let her go! "What am I going to do Chase? There is nothing ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hunted
Luke - Hunter "He did do that to you." "What, you didn't know?" she asked, spinning around. She looked mad, despite the tears forming in her eyes. "No. Heck, he ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hunted
Anna - Hunted "Hey Chris? You want to come with me and try to find Lucinda?" "Sure," Chris spoke up for the first time in a while.
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Steelers Won!!!
The only reason why I started watching it was for the commercials and The Boss. I wanted him to sing Santa Claus is Comin to Town, because that is the ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Darcy or Mr. Cullen?
The only thing with Mr. Darcy that I have read/seen was when I read the first half of Pride and Prejudice. He was annoying. And then Edward...well...he is way to ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Steelers Won!!!
It was that last play. But you know, the best team doesn't always win. :D
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Favorite Britney Spears Song?
All of them are songs that get stuck in your head, but I personally don't like most of them. Circus is the one I like the most, I guess.
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
Chase Heck yeah, you're definitely strong. Chase say Emily smile a little as he thought those words. "But what are we going to do now," she whispered. We just have ...
Feb 1, 2009
