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Hiya Storm! You request, I come. I think all the grammer issues have been pointed out. Watch out for changing tenses, hon. :wink: I'll help explain it if you want ...

Hiya Lily! You requested, I come. All the grammar issues have already been pointed out, so I don't think I need to point them out again. But I do have ...

I am willing to do reviews, my YWS people. Here we go.... How I review: I try doing a bit of everything. I do nit-picks, but I try doing more ...

But....but...but....You can't end it right there! Ahem. Hiya Ellie! Finally. I thought to myself. Since it is a thought, it would probably be best to put that in italics. That ...

Abigayle Veranda Ow... "Are you okay?" Estelle asked me, after a minute or so. As soon as we got to the bottom of the knoll, we fell of our horses. ...

Hiya Elf! I thought this was pretty interesting from all that I've read, Without an answer , he slowly opened the door. You forgot that comma, hon. Despian knew to ...

Awww....Good job Rosey! I didn't notice this was romantic fiction until the end. :D It was an all-too familiar place for her to spend weekends. This sentence sounds a little ...

way at all. I've seen other members actually give a story a rating. Like, 5/10. I just don't like it. *shudders*

Hiya Ashleigh! I haven't read anything of yours, and I thought that this might be interesting. :D IT was that cold unforgettable winter’s day. Typo. The t in it is ...

Hiya emoxdinosaur! Welcome to YWS! We hope you enjoy it here. Since you are new, here is a good look at the reviews . They might come in handy, hon. ...

*steals all the gummy bears and Swedish Fish*

Hiya Forever! Here is my review. XD I was standing in an enormous castle hall with an enormous ceiling and great candelabras adorning the walls. You used enormous one too ...

HaHa! Another storybook with Princess. :D You also are doing a storybook about my worst fear. Name: Marie Chasen Age: 27 Gender: Female Country: France Personality: Wants good for everyone, ...

Very depressing, but still good! :D What do you do when you can’t move forward in life, when you truly know that’s an impossibility ? I don't think you should ...

I epically fail. Especially since I'm the fifth reviewer or something like that. The way you described Nathaniel's personality was brilliant. I love the way you made it. As soon ...