LindsayG

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it!

please comment, I want your views

Hey can you please revirew "Love Bites Especially when you're a plus size" ? and "Love Me or Leave Me" please?

That was really great! I totally loved the beginning and end, both keep you in suspense! Great job.

LIFE HAPPENS... Pretty good

Chapter One Love. Like anyone actually knows what it means. Sure, they think they do, but really? It’s the stars, they tell you, – that queasy feeling you get at ...

I'm a five feet specimen of sheer feminity I have eyes which speak with vivid clarity I'm so innocuous yet frightingly blunt So forgive me but this is no stunt ...

That is art, truly amazing...perhaps the most amazing i've read on this site so far, keep the fire, you're talented...really talented, the story was just beautiful

Thanks! I'll make the changes soon or right now. But thanks a lot for the help!

This is awesome keep going, I'm actually getting addicted but you need to work on the synopsis though, not very catchy

okay, I'm new to this but I'll try my best. First of all, It feels like i already know some parts of the story but that's okay I'm usually head ...

Thanks Esther, so much for the help. I really appreciate it.

EPISODE ONE (View of Eva running on the streets) [b]Voice Over : Ghana, population; 23,350,927, professional dance studios...none. Dance is a major part of the culture here...but the closest you ...

PROLOGUE "Lindsey!" "In a minute mom" "You said that five minutes ago, now come on its almost 10:30 you need to get to bed, you have school tomorrow" "Exactly, that's ...

hey, i just joined, i have two posts, one prologue for a novel and a first episode for a series, can you please check it out and tell me what ...