LindsayG

Hey! This was really fun to read. And very suspense-filled! Because i haven't read the previous cahpters I'm wondering what the hell is going on? And why are they on ...

The plot thickens.......lol. Okay so first of all, i haven't read the other chapters, this was the only one. And it was totally worth it! Because now i feel i ...

PROLOGUE GLACEWOOD ALEX’S HOUSE 7:35pm THE GLACEWOOD HIGHLIGHTS Someone once said that if life hands you lemons, you make lemonade. But another someone also said that if the going gets ...

This is was amazing to read! I even had to read it three times! It's deeply moving in that it speaks to your senses and makes you question what you're ...

The story was filled with suspense from beginning to end, and i loved every bit of it, wondering what's going to happen next. The choice of language was very good ...

encahnted, truly inspiring....I love the message i love the words i love how its written, I love this poem, I really do. It's awesome. Welcome and keep writing....you're going to ...

totally awesome poem!!!! I loved every bit of it!

This is the shortest yet most beautiful short poem i've ever come across. You said so much in so little words...I've got to learn how to do that! I loved ...

Chapter Nine I wonder who ever came up with the crap that running helps to clear your head. All I know is I’m sweaty, I’m panting like I was literally ...

There is a time in life, when everything must cease. When life and it's breaths disappear with rapid ease. The things that were, like our dreams become deceased. Each breathe ...

That was depply moving, you made me want to be the girl in the poem, even with all the shame. That was super awesome. I loved every part of it! ...

Very inspiring story, Absolute faith in God even in the face of extreme adversity, I love the message. Keep writing, you will inspire lots and lots of people.

lol, You really should give yourself a lot more credit, its really not that bad. I actually enjoyed it. I thought it was short, humorous and totally sweet...three of my ...

That! In one word was AWESOME! it started out a little slow for me, trying to figure out what the story is about and how the vharacters fit in. But ...

Hey, first off, I'd just like to say that I liked your beginning...straight in the middle of the story, that always a great way to begin. So here are a ...