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Re: The Foreign Land and the Voice Within
There is a silence that comes with being in a foreign land, It's not peace, it's not bewilderment, It's a mix of both compounded in complexity in the initial stages, ...
Apr 13, 2013 -
Re: Christmas One-Liners...
and then the night passed away, and the girl with the keyboard decided to a spot.
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to the Rapist
How did if feel? All those days you spent watching me heal? How did it feel? Watching me scurry in and infinitely lose my zeal? How did it feel? Seeing ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts Of A Victim
I visualize hes hand on your behind, So am i still suppose to think that your mine? I've put hours on end to see your smile, But you've messed up ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Do you write every day?
I write everyday, if not on paper, or on the laptop then I write and rewrite in my head. Sometimes its actually funny. I can write a cwhole chapter in ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Love bites especially when you're a plus size...cont'd part3
Chapter fifteen You know it’s moments like this that I wish my life was a movie, and I was a character. But sadly no…It’s a freaking circus and apparently I’m ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Loneliness
I like this....but why didn't you continue????
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Tiger by the tail
I don't know about you, but when it comes to me, I tend to be extremely picky on the types of movies that I watch. Most of my time is ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: The Stranger (Chapter 14)
Hey Freakette!!!! Here to review again.....and all I can say is whoah!!!!!! Once again, I was completely blown away....You a an amazing writer. I connected with the characters, the dialogue ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: The Me and the You that Hope
I am me In this vast world of uncertainties; I stay me Watching time float around me, and everything cease with rapid ease I breath me Wanting to fight, but ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: My biggest regret
Someone once said, “People build you up, just so they can tear you back down.” Well, I do not know that someone, but perhaps sometimes you do not necessarily need ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: The Ghosts of Octavius-Chapter 1
Hey ZLYF, Here to review your work today.... Don't know much about tearing it apart, but I'll do my best... Firstly, I liked how you started this chapter, it gives ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Footprints On The Beach: Part Four
Hello Herebemonsters....will be reviewing your work today. Okay, so first of I liked the story line and I feel you wrote it...told it so beautiful. You used exquisite language to ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Game On (Level 5)
After the feast Axile showed Jay to his room, while Conie showed me to my own. Conie talked me through where everything was - which went in one hear and ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A Play of Roses: Chapter 3
"We're done for today, keep up your studies, stay away from bar wenches, and well, don't get poisoned and die" He said has he raised a hand in farewell. Dresden ...
Sep 25, 2011
