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Re: Pastless (Chapter 1)
wow.... :shock: I am so happy I took the time to read it! Kylan, That was really good. Like 'Jules the jester' said...Who are the Hyte? The rest I got. ...
May 4, 2007 -
Re: A scene from my book: Clan blood
OOH! OOH! I know who they are! :D lol Yeah you like posted who they were already right? Anyways... It took me a while to read this. Sorry. But I ...
Apr 27, 2007 -
Re: a love letter|TO MY ABUSER
Ok I REALLY liked this. It was very good. Just one or two suggestions... Like a withered rose dripping with my blood under this dim light bulb This line seemed ...
Apr 22, 2007 -
Re: Death (Desperado Danny In Despair)
Fabien, I really liked this for some reason. I'm mean it was a little depressing, but me (being almost 14) can I guess understand that and relate to it...well not ...
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: Pet Day (ADULT LANGUAGE, ADULT CONTENT)
I liked it. It was pretty good in my opinion. I do agree with Sureal though. I mean it does seem hard to believe that a woman that violent would ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
The older boy sat completely sill staring off into space listening with eyes closed. Shouldn't "sill" be 'still'? Pulling off the talisman from his belt, contained magic shaping itself into ...
Mar 26, 2007