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Re: Pet Day (ADULT LANGUAGE, ADULT CONTENT)
I liked it. It was pretty good in my opinion. I do agree with Sureal though. I mean it does seem hard to believe that a woman that violent would ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: An Outcast that Doesn't Care.
Because he is an outcast. That's why He is seen as one in my poem. He's not in pain he just is in his own little world and knows that ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: An Outcast that Doesn't Care.
Ok, this is just a small thing I wrote cause I didn't have anything to do so, It isn't going to be really good. I sit here in my purple ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
The older boy sat completely sill staring off into space listening with eyes closed. Shouldn't "sill" be 'still'? Pulling off the talisman from his belt, contained magic shaping itself into ...
Mar 26, 2007 -
Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
The older boy sat completely sill staring off into space listening with eyes closed. Shouldn't "sill" be 'still'? Pulling off the talisman from his belt, contained magic shaping itself into ...
Mar 26, 2007 -
Re: Bright
I look into the light, Its shine is too bright! It's unsettling and painful. My eyes are stinging so bad. I try to turn my head, but it's too addicting. ...
Mar 14, 2007 -
Re: Just die
I don't know what this is so yeah... I can't stand it anymore! Just die stop laying in the hospital bed Just die you're killing me on the inside Sickness, ...
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
His mind had wandered off for a while, but he walked into someone and fell on his ass. "Sorry Chap." the voice said leaning down to help him up. "It's ...
Mar 11, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
"I don't get it though" She said."It's daylight." "Your point?" He asked smugly. "Well...the stories all say- "Stories are just excuses to kill people."He said with his eyes flaring. Alexx ...
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Alexx sits on her window sill staring into the stars, trying to stay awake. She sees a cat sitting in front of her house staring at her. She feels like ...
Mar 9, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
JERRY! He's 15 and is always getting into trouble and pulling pranks YAY!
Mar 9, 2007 -
Re: YWS Mobile
Ok that's great and all, and got onto mobile from my PC (somehow) but is there a way to get it back to normal?
Jan 27, 2007 -
Re: Taneantra's first Adventure
Coolness!!!
Jan 17, 2007 -
Re: Dead Inside
Thanx 4 the critisizm. It's my first time posting poem and I need A LOT of help So...Thanx!
Jan 14, 2007 -
Re: Soul Collision
I think it was just beautiful. Sad, but very beautiful. And I love the way you wrote it. It's so different, but it's still awesome. Keep it up! =)
Jan 14, 2007
