Lindsaroo

Hey Sam, This is coming along great! Its plot is good and I love the detail. And I have no harsh/mean critiques on this. I know, SO disappointing. woah that's ...

I keep having these dreams. Nightmares Of you in battle. Dead. I wake up crying. Alone I can't go back to sleep. Scared Ever since you left for war. These ...

1.)Ok If you put up a character, you can make the font any color you want, except red, just make sure it is a color though (Green, blue orange etc.) ...

Adam_Atlantian and Rieda

School

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Ok. Well I love your writing so, or well this story, It's hard for me to say anything. But...I don't really think the ending was forced. It's good so far. ...

Ok well, yeah...Just reply to this so I can know how much it sucks. Thanks. I've been in darkness my whole life. Watching monsters and demons pass by. No urge ...

HA! I DID spell it right! And Lol Matt! No more dreaming for you. :mean: :shock: no more dreaming??? but I need it or then i am lost in a ...

Bleck! me and Ash?? Psh. whatever girl. And Rieda, Love ya but, I just don't go that way. Lol Megan and Pro-They'd be cute. And I have no thoughts at ...

Omg! I've never seen this before! *feels ashamed* Rieda and Matt! (Mattster) < Sorry if I spelled it wrong. *runs away before she is eaten*

wow.... :shock: I am so happy I took the time to read it! Kylan, That was really good. Like 'Jules the jester' said...Who are the Hyte? The rest I got. ...

Yeah.......I liked it :D It looks like it's gonna be awesome. Now I have to go read Ch. 1.

Evil? How's that evil?

"You're crazy!" She said pulling his arm off. "Do you want to get us killed?!" Jakson was totally shocked. He was trying to be comforting and he got yelled at? ...