Lindsaroo

This was really good. Um...I liked how you kept to a pattern and still made it a really nice poem. And it was just...good. I really don't know what to ...

Oh this is a really great poem. I love the rhymes and everything. I don't really know what to say except that it was good. Um...yeah... Keep up the good ...

Ok just saying, this made me laugh. Yes, it's cliche in the way that this has been written over and over, but it's also relating to a common topic. So ...

I actually liked this. Yes you had absolutely no grammar and everything. But if you ignore that and look at the actual poem and read and understand the emotions then ...

Aww laf, this is really good. Your boyfriend is a good poet. I think it flowed really well and I don't see anything wrong with it. It's got a nice ...

Oh my god Elliot. I'm really sorry. I have to say that this poem was really beautiful kinda made me cry. And I'm not even lying because I have a ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS!! Hope you like it here! Lots O' Luv, Lindsay

I like this a lot. Umm...I really can't find anything against it except that in some parts it didn't flow too great. But I'm now totally in love with the ...

Ok this poem was ok, but there were a few things that soured my opinion. Once I used to live a happy life, filled with happiness and no strife. Your ...

I do agree that it is slightly redundant, but I actually liked this. I think that it being all together and not seperated into stanzas was slightly hard on the ...

This is really nice. I really don't have anything to say about it except that I had to read it over one or two times to really understand the meaning. ...

Ok I actually like this a bit. I agree that something major like the alchohol should be closer to the begining. Maybe if you were trying to avoid it and ...

Well hey there. Welcome to YWS! Once you do post some stuff I'd be more then happy to read it, as well as a lot of other members. Might not ...

Hello to all of the new members! And Welcome to YWS!!!

*Ok then, let's get to the meeting or whatever. Everyone can meet there so we have everything on level ground aye?* Skylar looked at her watch. She should probably head ...