Lilyy03

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LOTR killed me. Badly. :cry: Yeah, generally, when I like a series (or even just one book) that's fairly long, I feel quite sad when I get to the end. ...

Well it looks like this could be a good story, but there really are a lot of spelling and punctuation mistakes that detract from it. So I can't really say ...

Brilliant! It looks great, and it's very informative and entertaining.

It was good. I agree it seems a little too preachy (and knowledge of facts and details often is important if you seriously want to affect the big picture, but ...

I liked this in some ways. Her way of thinking is interesting to see. The narration was unusual--suitably robotic at times. Though, in a few places it seems to be ...

Very cute and funny. :) Gotta love dogs. In addition to putting spaces between paragraphs, there should also be space (as in spacebar) after punctuation. That'd make it quite a ...

Lately I've found that I feel a lot better, and I make more progress, when I write with pencil and paper. It tends to get quite messy at times, but ...

Way back when, my biggest influences were JK Rowling and Brian Jacques... um *slinks away* Right now, I'm not really sure which authors influence me the most... I think I've ...

Both of them are amazing! I really love the second one.

Good story... Quite chilling. :) Just a few minor things I noticed... The girl gasped heavily, her breath melting on the bronze dagger at her neck. "Gasped heavily" is ok, ...

Woooo, happy new year! Good luck to everyone, in their writing and everything else.

Phorcys - got it :) Sylverdawn and Joeducktape - thanks so much for reading and reviewing this! It helps a lot.

I'm trying, with difficulty, to read Eldest (by Christopher Paolini). :? When it gets too boring, I switch to Jane Eyre. A weird combination, lol.

Aww, only 10... Most of these are series, hope that's ok. - Lord of the Rings - Harry Potter - Earthsea - A Great and Terrible Beauty - The Old ...