Lilyy03

I liked this. It's quite meaningful. A few things, though: The first couple paragraphs didn't strike me as being that great. While having some good points (I liked paragraph 3), ...

Your presentation of werewolves is interesting... Though, I do think it'd be a better start for the story if you had a bit more action in there. It doesn't have ...

I've only read part of it, sorry, but here are my thoughts on it so far: I found a lot of it (the beginning especially) to be a bit, mm, ...

Welcome, Andy! It looks like you're off to a great start. I've learned a lot from reading and posting at YWS, hope the same works for you!

On one hand, I agree that parodies of cliches tend to become cliches themselves. But, if one can be creative, engaging, and (perhaps most importantly) funny, it can still be ...

Hmm... I'm not so sure about your portrayal of Hufflepuff. The Sorting Hat's song in OotP mentions that, after the other three had picked out the qualities they wanted in ...

Prologue . ;) If you need a spell check, YWS has one that'll do the trick--just click the button at the lower right corner when you post something. And putting ...

A large mammal of the bird family A mammal, by definition, is a member of the class of mammals. Birds have a separate class. I know it's sci-fi/humor, but if ...

I haven't read Trickster's Choice, though I might since I've heard some good stuff about it... I'm not really a fan of Tamora Pierce, though. I read the first two ...

It is well-written, but I have to agree with Trident that it doesn't capture the terror. It does seem to be written too knowingly... as if the narrator isn't actually ...

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Granted, but your answers are all wrong. I wish I had more notebooks.

It sounds cool. It makes me think of not-too-serious fantasy, maybe with two main characters and lots of surprises... I would probably pick it up. Feed the Hex (I should ...

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I always kinda prefer abstract patterns for backgrounds... Though I agree a spring theme might be cool. There are some nice somewhat spring-related ones on these pages: Flowers: Leafy-looking things: ...