Lilyy03

Cool! :D I'm not the only person who gets my best ideas while in the shower... Dreams have been a good source for me too. I've gotten ideas for characters, ...

(I wrote a long critique for you and then the browser decided to close itself. GRR! :() My main points were: -Your style in general is a bit clunky. I ...

That's just... Wrong. Parents shouldn't have the right to impose defects on their children that their children would not otherwise have. Good parents want what's good for their children, not ...

(yay for fantasy and commas ^_^) Welcome, everyone! I hope you'll all like it here.

Penguins!!! YAY! :D Welcome to the site! Hope you enjoy it. I look forward to reading your work!

lol :) Welcome!

Brilliant article! It's going to be very useful. *bookmarks*

(Most people here seem to know all these things cold, but for those who don't... If I've missed anything or made mistakes, please say so!) Proper use of punctuation in ...

Be sure to capitalize all your I's. Where you have "routes", I think you mean "roots". Not like my teachers constant criticism. Should have an apostrophe at the end of ...

Welcome, Alex! Looks like we have quite similar (dis)tastes in music. ;) Enjoy the site!

Rain water filled the craters in the gravel on the road. The gutters streamed with the rainwater flowing down into the drains. You say "rainwater" twice, very close together... It's ...

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A few little mistakes I spotted-- The bow string snapped back, and a stinging pain went through her arm which made her wince in pain and drop the bow. You ...

Lake

Wow... your drawings are all very nice! Sorry to hear about your scanner. :(