Lilyy03

Does the exotic plant appreciate natural fertilizer?

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Damsel

ShadowTwit--I'm pretty sure the people here will be able to help you. ;) Welcome! Have fun. Theruralruins--nice username! Your story sounds interesting. Welcome to YWS.

Welcome, Qamar! Nice to meet you. Enjoy the site!

Welcome, Maria! I hope you'll like it here. You can feel free to PM me if you need help, a critique, or someone to chat with. :)

First off, use a spellcheck. :) You might also want to read this , about punctuation in dialogue. Looks like you could have an interesting story going here, though I ...

An intriguing, chilling start... Though I agree that the beginning was quite slow and not all that engaging. Maybe trimming down her introspective thoughts would make it a bit better? ...

This was actually quite good. It kept me interested once it got going. I think the beginning could be better though--a character being woken up is a somewhat overused way ...

The Wizeman Echelon prepared for death. For some reason "Wizeman" made me laugh, and I'm guessing that wasn't the effect you were going for, lol. I think it was because ...

Adding to that ^ You've hissed all your mystery lessons and tasted two whole worms. And-- Let me sew you to your sheet.

Oooh, cool. I do something like this. Well, with a somewhat larger notebook, and a pencil. I can't stand the Sharpie smell. :D But I may try it this way ...

Hello, welcome! :D

Aw, thanks Jenna! Sure. :) I'm assuming that character's name is Fai? :lol: Here's what I made, let me know if you want anything different.

Underneath Giza, Egypt, 1997 The glyphs were smaller here, and more crowded. It was as if their creator had been running out of time and space, but still had much ...