LilySoulMahon

These picture's we're both taken when I was having a giggle, the Martin Johnson one was taken at a Boyslikegirls concert and I just loved how the light caught him ...

Lmao, did this actually happen? :') It made me really giggle, but I would of really liked more detail of your emotions and more of what you were actually seeing ...

Hey, I really liked this. Though yeah, you really do need to capitalize your letters because it can distract the reader from the story itself that you are writing which ...

I liked this. It was different. I do however, believe it could be more powerful, I like the detail but I do think it was slightly lacking. I could feel ...

A beautiful piece. The imagery and structure is simplistic yet powerful aswell. It brings across an array of emotion while also bringing forward some flashes of the memories that are ...

Wow, I really like this piece of poetry. Its simple yet powerful. I do however think you could of added more verses cause, though I know its meant to be ...

Shawn... She lies there. Screaming. Crying. Fighting. I watch her through the hospital glass. My hands fixed into fists as I try to stay in control. I feel like breaking ...

You know I love this one hunni. :) I love the detail of it and how it twists and turns. The detailing of the musical notes. This would really look ...

Wow, these are gorgeous!!! I always try to take pictures of the moon but it never works. Where are you to get the sky so clear? I mean you can ...

Wow, I like this, you always post good work. Its emotional and quite Dark I think. Though would of really liked to have been able to of read more, like ...

Wow, these are beautiful. The colours so vibrant and the lighting is perfectly captured in each picture. Though might I suggest you try different times of day. May provoke some ...

Thank you for the comments on this piece of writing, I have removed it for awhile for personal purposes (nothing bad btw, haha) I am planning to edit it and ...

I like this piece. Its calming and simple. The imagery is good, however, I would like more detail in it as I thought it was slightly lacking. Just thought the ...

Wow, I love this. Short and sweet and emotional. I feel the pain yet also the power the person feels at the end for being done. However, I would like ...

Wow, this was quickly writen?? Thats actually hard to believe as its an amazing piece. The detail in it is writen perfectly and it kept me reading to the end ...