LilySoulMahon

I liked this, it was quite powerful. I also liked the length of it, short and sweet. The detail was nice also, put some good images in my head of ...

Wow, I liked this, it was really amusing. Kept me giggling all the way through and it has some strong imagery in it which was used with simple detail. I ...

I really liked this a lot, it was certainly different but really enjoyable. I liked the structure of it, it was detailed yet didn't add to much to ruin it. ...

A little poem I wrote with my Boyfriend while relaxing, I know its not my best but we like it :) Together we lie in bed for two, our bodies ...

I like this, short and powerful in its views. Also the structure was nice though I do think a bit more length would have been nice as it didn't make ...

This was simple yet quite lovely. It made me smile. However I would have liked more detail to be added in it as I felt more of a desription would ...

I liked this, I can really image it as a song. Was beautifully written and has some nice simplistic imagery. Made me smile. :) Though I did feel like it ...

I liked this. It was different and really did make me smile. The structure made me feel like I was reading a story however; though I do know its a ...

I enjoyed this piece of poetry. It was different and it worked well, though I do think more descriptions could work nicely with it as I found it slightly rushed ...

I really like this. Its dark. I also like how its set out, though the structure is not consistant and apear to have a repeat it fits nicely. I also ...

Wow, amazing. Truly amazing piece of writng. You really do have talent Charlotte :) I'm glad I have a friend like you who I can compare stories with, aha. But ...

I'm sitting at the computer and trying not to blush. My eyes which are forced to look ahead, want to glance to my left side, where a guy I have ...

I can wake up one day and feel like the world is against me, that everything I touch is rubbish, that I'm a lowlife and that I deserve to be ...

Wow, an impressive piece. Though I don't think I get a cookie as I have no idea what its on about though the emotions and descriptions used are amazing. I ...

I liked this, it was different :) I liked the style. It showed fustration as you're trying to reboot the computer. It gave good simplistic imagery, yet with an array ...