LilySoulMahon

I really liked the flowing of this poem. Was simple but effective. I think it was really well thought out. The rhyming made me smile but I would really think ...

Night falls and the sky covers the surroundings in a blanket of ice cold snow. I turn and I feel a sharp pain burst through my chest then my body ...

I like this, its unusual. A little hard to follow but I got the idea of it. Though it is slightly lacking the emotion i'd be expecting you to feel. ...

I really thought this was fantastic. It gave a real emotional feel to it of the love and pain that is to be felt. Also it has quite a powerful ...

Hey, Happy New Year :) I really like this piece, give a stong detailed imagery and can place you to the place you are trying to create. However, I would ...

This is a good piece and i'm sure what most people, including me, think in the halls. Though mines followed by alot of swearing and cursing of the younger years ...

This really made me smile. Its unique and what most of us are thinking most of the time i think! Amusing stuff like this is always good and i think ...

I find this really good and a showing of equality in difference. Makes me smile and makes me want to read more of simular pieces :D You are talented.

Wow, i can relate to this alot. Makes me think of some down moments but yet fills me back with the feelings of happiness i felt once it was sorted. ...

I find this to be a lovely piece of writing. Its powerful yet subtle. Made me feel like there was a more hidden meaning behind it for some reason. I ...

He strikes a match. Then i watch solemnly as he breathes out the grey dark smoke that fumes from the pitiful long white sticks of dirt and waste, then sigh. ...