LilySoulMahon

This really did make me giggle; I look like a right weirdo randomly laughing in the computer room. Great piece of work :') really imaginative, makes you wonder if this ...

I like this piece of poetry, it’s actually quite sweet and I like the imagery in it. However, I think this would look better if you capitalized your "I"'s as ...

I really like this simplistic piece of poetry :) The way it flows and the structure of it is quite sweet. It brings images and once reading it I couldn't ...

Hello Saul. My name is Frank. You don't really know me but I know all about you. I sit here in your subconscious waiting for you to become weak or ...

Wow. I love this piece of poetry, I adore the darkness of this piece and find the imagery to be perfected for the true fear this person is feeling. It ...

Beautiful. I love the simplistic imagery of this piece of poetry. It flows and it makes me smile. It also makes me wonder and want more to read, though I ...

Once again a great piece to this book, it was really strong and I couldn't take my eyes off the page. Now I think Imaginemymind got most of the little ...

Wow, I really like this and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it. Its interesting and keeps me captured and I'd definately, if this was a book, buy ...

Inspired by my cutie friend Lyndsey

I watch him, dazed, in the silence of the greatness of his music filled is bare yet he has filled it. He plays and while he does a smile lies ...

I like this. The imagery is simplistic yet strong and the powerful appeal of it is lovely. I found it actually, though the structure could be worked on slightly better, ...

I like this, its quite beautiful. Makes me smile :) The structure is nice and simplistic making it something easy to follow and capturing for the reader. I also liked ...

What do you class as cheating? A simple kiss? A passionate embrace? A lovers meeting? All seen as different things to different people, now, in my eyes I class them ...

I really liked this, it was a great poem and though I do think another verse or two would have fitted well with it, it did keep me reading to ...

I liked this, the title jumped out with me to begin with and I found it a perfect piece of poetry that I personally enjoyed. It kept me reading but ...