LilyReagan

Hmm. Well, it's very short and sweet..... But to the point? I suppose a poem never really gets 'to the point', though.... Can’t write; The words never come. } Maybe ...

This was a beautiful retelling of my favorite Greek Myth. The version I read included no ending, so I am glad that you did. I really loved it. I couldn't ...

Hmmm. There was only one thing that caught my eye: "Credits was a certain type of money." I feel like the reader could understand this already without the explanation, so ...

For the first piece, it was good. I do agree with clograbby that you should probably use pronouns. It appears redundant. I, who am usually not a fan of space-epics ...

One thing I get so mad about is that Lily is spelled with one L in this case (and in mine)! I did like it... but it seems to be ...

Sorry I died, guys.... I felt obligated, though....

Take this quiz. And then guess what flower I am. PM the person under you to tell them the answer, or you mess up the flow.

~Kennedy~ I shook out my long hair, and began to work. I loved Simulations classes, and today's lesson was, by far, the best of the semester. Our task was to ...

~Jewel~ Jewel hadn't realized she'd passed out until she woke up. A tan face hovered over her. Jewel recognised it as the face of the guy who had comforted her. ...

*I forgot to explain. Bella's first dragon, Hiro, hatched for her on her fourth birthday. Wait, does that seem unreallistic, please tell me. I didn't mean to say that Hiro ...

*takes deep breath* So.... As clograbby said, normalcy is a real word. Now that that's out of the way.... The archaic speak: Sorry, I'm writing a novel on an Elizabethian ...

The top one was cute.... The bottom...just okay.

~Jewel~ I hated that piano. Utterly hated it. I wandered back to my tent after the little memorial service for Cowboy, and wondered. There was only one thing I knew ...

~Bella~ "So...." King Hanik said. "I think I can afford to post you out just below me, and equal to General Ianeil. I grimaced. Hanik smiled. "I would post you ...

Loved it! The poem flowed so very well, and your verse was beautiful. There's relly nothing I can critique on that hasn't been mentioned my another one of your adoring ...