Lilith

First of all, thank you to everyone who read this. Your advice has been wonderful. Second, to Sleeping Valor, the story will actually be told from several different points of ...

You reviewed my Prologue and its only fair that I review yours. Fairview town is not the most accepting of places to say the least. Only suggestion is to either ...

Okay, the title grabbed me but for totally different reasons. (dirty thoughts, dirty dirty thoughts) but I liked it. It was a quick, very interesting piece. Yes the characters may ...

Hello and welcome to OZ. or something like that. The names Lilith, but if you like you can call me Lil. All the big tips have already been handed out ...

Ah, the great debate between sci-fi and fantasy. Personally, reading a beautiful blend between the two genres is all I can hope for. Anyway, welcome to the forums. The posts ...

To anyone who reads through the whole thing, I thank you. Prologue “I don’t think I’ll ever fully understand your game,” Dala grumbled, digging her talons into the supple wood ...

absolutely Which witch is which?

Noel~I cry because I think I'm loosing touch with the world around me, and walls that used to protect me are slowly falling in on me. Bastian~I cry because I ...

This is definitely a unique take on a story I've seen attempted many times. ProfessorRabbit made some great suggestions grammatically so I won't go over that. But I will say ...

The square root of your nose. If I buy a motorcycle should I put pants on it?

I'm working on a story that deals with a character struggling through her nightmares. I'm just in love with my two main characters Noel and Bastian, but I don't have ...

This is sort of like the Title Feedback thread only, instead of giving a title, you give a short paragraph synopsis and then the next post gives they're idea for ...

To ButterFlyInk: The ending is what inspired the story. It came from a dream and I just asked myself "What happened for my characters to get there?" But I could ...

Sound like either a bunch of stories describing séances, or a mystery about ghosts. Might raise my interest. The Shifting

Of course there is such a thing as free will. Its what made me what I am today, stubborn, lost, and confused -- Spark I almost wish there wasn't. I ...