Lilith

:twisted: "Cause she knows she liiikkkeess him." ~ Amelia Which came first: the chicken or the egg?

I've only really got one thing to say in this post so I'll make it quick. You've definately distrorted the flow of time. You said that he woke up in ...

The Devil’s Walk. I stared up at the sign overhead. No matter how many times I saw it, it never ceased to thrill me. The Words were embossed into the ...

I want to disagree just a smidge. I used to write out stuff like that and honestly, most of those characters turned out to be generic duds. Characters shouldn't be ...

Well, I definately agree with number 4. For me, (with the few pieces I finish) I always become really critical and judgemental and in the end, they turn out better ...

It a beautiful piece and I would love to read more. Honestly, from what I saw, there weren't any grammatical problems. Now you best get the next chapter up quick. ...

A know-it-all with kick butt fighting skills. Daphne Everett

It was a good first chapter but you do need to capitalize Red Sox and fix the spelling on the word which at the top. I would also, definitely go ...

Welcome, welcome, welcome, welcome, welcome,... I just thought I should say HI. :D

Set one thing strait, I don't have an accent. You know, in case the title threw you off. Anyway's, you can call me lil if you want but Lilith is ...