LilacSabrie

Awwww - this was a bit heart-wrenching for me near the end. I could definitely feel the anguish that the speaker's going through. So right there, that is a thumbs-up! ...

Ooooh, a story about a Japanese mother and children? Shame about the kids though - I felt bad for them once I read what he did - shame on him! ...

Hah! I've laughed so hard at rule number 4. Now, onto my short yet 'well-thought out' review: You've clearly got the upper hand on Death's characterization. You handled it pretty ...

Most of the time I get my inspiration from music, video games, art, surfing the web, and of course books! Also, I have to note that stuff like legends, history ...

'The Suicidest'....strange title, never heard anything like it. I'm guessing there is a reason though. ^^ I Breathed in shallow quick breaths, eyes wide at the site of the city ...

Hello there Kafka! First, let me just say that I can definitely see that your imagery is one of your stronger points of your writing. This was really fantastic for ...

Oh wow...this is a very nice take on the Humpty Dumpty premise! Especially when it's from another person's point of view - very clever to me. However, there is one ...

I'm new here, but I'm going to try my hand at this: I felt this had some beautifully worded moments, moments where the reader can easily visualize what is happening ...

Okay! I'll be sure to read over the other works here and give some critique. Nice to meet you, by the way. ^^

I was looking for a place where I can improve on my writing and this seems like a pretty friendly place. I've looked on some pages and already I feel ...