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LilacSabrie

  • Other Poetry Re: Ants

    Haha, this sounds like an anthem I need for those pesky intruders in my kitchen. Something I want to ask though: what is a 'dumbs'? I'm not really sure whether ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Ballet Shoe

    This story seemed so fast-paced that even I felt left behind. The dialogue was very good; you varied up the dialects and vocabulary according to a certain character, so that ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Research Re: Need help with my coming -of-age story

    In my writing project, my main character grows from a teenager to an adult and I just need some help on how to make a smooth transition from kid to ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tickled Pink Sky

    ...I won't lie, I was attracted to the poem because the title had the word 'pink' in it...I'm a pink fanatic. ^_^ The only thing I want to remark on ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Fair Lady

    My, my...this was a very beautiful poem. The beginning almost made me blush - the speaker's words sounded so alluring and nice. And you say that this was your first ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Research Re: How many words should one write a day?

    That makes sense. I was only worried because of what 'qualifies' as a writer to some experienced writers. Although, I can safely say I feel much, much better after hearing ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Fire and Ice

    Hello and Happy Review Day! Hmmm...I can see the effect you were trying to achieve from this prologue, although it is a bit short. Oh well, here we go! "She ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]

    Hi Ranger! The title caught my eye, so here I am. ^^ First off, I want to say that your dialogue skills are excellent. You wrote it in a way ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Truth or Fear?

    This was actually interesting to read. Although a bit too short for me to review, I shall do my very best! ^w^ -Your imagery was very good here. I could ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Truth or Fear?

    This was actually interesting to read. Although a bit too short for me to review, I shall do my very best! ^w^ -Your imagery was very good here. I could ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Names...what do you do?

    For me? I just choose the names that I think suit them. If that character sounds like a Bob, I name him Bob. I tend to go away from 'meaningful' ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Research Re: How many words should one write a day?

    And just how long should a writer write a day? Sorry, just a bit curious since I've heard that a person needs to write a million words before they are ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Sacred Slut

    goodness. This poem has left me speechless, but I'm sorry to say that my review is short. On the plus side, your poem held a powerful message behind it. I ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Kafka's intellectually stimulating reviews

    Hello there! If you ever have the time to do so, would you like to review my work here? Thanks in advance! ^^

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Aria: A Legacy Reborn

    PLEASE do not give this story mercy - slash it to pieces, ravage it, study it with your microscope, anything to help me improve on my skills! Need all the ...

    Mar 14, 2011


Excuse me I have never *lied* about a character I just don't tell the truth
— AceassinOfTheMoon