LilacSabrie

Haha, this sounds like an anthem I need for those pesky intruders in my kitchen. Something I want to ask though: what is a 'dumbs'? I'm not really sure whether ...

This story seemed so fast-paced that even I felt left behind. The dialogue was very good; you varied up the dialects and vocabulary according to a certain character, so that ...

In my writing project, my main character grows from a teenager to an adult and I just need some help on how to make a smooth transition from kid to ...

...I won't lie, I was attracted to the poem because the title had the word 'pink' in it...I'm a pink fanatic. ^_^ The only thing I want to remark on ...

My, my...this was a very beautiful poem. The beginning almost made me blush - the speaker's words sounded so alluring and nice. And you say that this was your first ...

That makes sense. I was only worried because of what 'qualifies' as a writer to some experienced writers. Although, I can safely say I feel much, much better after hearing ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! Hmmm...I can see the effect you were trying to achieve from this prologue, although it is a bit short. Oh well, here we go! "She ...

Hi Ranger! The title caught my eye, so here I am. ^^ First off, I want to say that your dialogue skills are excellent. You wrote it in a way ...

This was actually interesting to read. Although a bit too short for me to review, I shall do my very best! ^w^ -Your imagery was very good here. I could ...

This was actually interesting to read. Although a bit too short for me to review, I shall do my very best! ^w^ -Your imagery was very good here. I could ...

For me? I just choose the names that I think suit them. If that character sounds like a Bob, I name him Bob. I tend to go away from 'meaningful' ...

And just how long should a writer write a day? Sorry, just a bit curious since I've heard that a person needs to write a million words before they are ...

goodness. This poem has left me speechless, but I'm sorry to say that my review is short. On the plus side, your poem held a powerful message behind it. I ...

Hello there! If you ever have the time to do so, would you like to review my work here? Thanks in advance! ^^

PLEASE do not give this story mercy - slash it to pieces, ravage it, study it with your microscope, anything to help me improve on my skills! Need all the ...