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Kinda nervous and excited for the movie, but from my experience, book adaptations have a high chance of failing in movies. So...let's cross our fingers...xP

This was for a competition. There is a 700-word limit, but I've added a bit more here. ________________________________________________________________________ The sound of crashing waves filled the b

Wow, that's a beautiful collection! Though I have to agree that I didn't really like the slug-on-a-dandelion flower. But overall, they're all lovely shots. Hope to see more from you! ...

Made it just as soon I came across this topic. :)

.............................. Split personalities, anyone? (Just kidding). :P

Hi there! I thought that this piece was OK. It wasn't too bad - I like the mysterious tone of the story. However, at the same time, it sounded a ...

Hi there! Actually, this poem was quite good. I liked the fact that you used a butterfly as a metaphor. The only problems I had were: 1) Punctuation - Although ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS :) Let me remind you that before posting a piece of work, you must post at least 2 reviews. Anyway, back to the poem. To ...

I like the Demonata series. Most of Darren Shan's books are simple in writing, but they're entertaining. He's great at those descriptions of gore too xD. - You said this ...

The world is a space that connects us all, intertwining our fates like fragile threads. Everytime we rushed past each other, the impact violently tore away our wings, its consequences ...

Wow. This is a strong subject to write about, and I'm glad you did it, because like angel23 mentioned, it's a common topic yet complex to express out. I like ...

Sorry, azzman, but I think I have to agree with smorgishborg and Snoink. The whole poem seems like words thrown together into one big mound. Yes, we have the words ...

Hiya there! I thought that this poem had some lovely imagery - for example, the first three stanzas. However, I thought that the ending was a bit too abrupt - ...

I the only one who got that this was blatant proselytizing? As a musician (thus familiar with Requiems) and a Christian (thus familiar with the Revelations) I'm incensed. This is ...