Lil_Pau

In my opinion, it depends on the patient. It is up to him/her to choose. Who would want to go through a large amount of pain on a hospital bed? ...

How can teenage pregnancy be stopped? Should children be taught about sex at a young age? Well, can they accept it? :P Aborting a child may seem cruel, but then ...

Let's say a man has many wives. How is he going to provide for them, and possibly the children? And I don't think a man will need that many women ...

I'll have to say no. First, at an early stage, it will create inequality in society, considering the large differences between the designer children and those children who were born ...

The sea of stars encircle me as I drift through the night; my hands, my feet, seem to reach nowhere. I painfully try to spread my crumpled wings, but when ...

The more we discover, the weirder the universe becomes... *Nod*

Why do young people now a days seem to compelled to enter a romantic relationship? The power of TV & music, perhaps? Teens have much more important stuff to do ...

Hey there! Now to the poem: I sketched a sketch to trace a face When you sketch, it's pretty obvious that you're making a sketch. So try replacing that phrase ...

This was quite good! I liked the tone of the poem and way you used a sailor as the subject. The only parts that didn't quite fare well for me ...

Not to steal your thunder, but a "liger" has been successfully created, and have been around since at least the 1930's. The longest living one lived to be 21 years ...

Even if a liger is successfully created, it's not likely to last long. I mean; look at Dolly. What's more, there will be animals' rights groups ready to stage protests ...

Hey KnightlyAngel09! This poem was great, especially your use of adjectives and wording. I like the rhyming scheme too - it fits the poem. There are some phrases such as ...

Hey there! I absolutely love the imagery here - while reading your poem, I could just imagine the scene of the cathedral, the forest... nice job! =) Only one thing: ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! =) It's been a long time since I had reviewed or posted anything on YWS, so let's get started with the review, shall we? ;) ...

Ever since I joined YWS, my writing has improved. I thank those who had reviewed my work, especially those who had given me advice on writing; it really helped. The ...