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Re: Hazy Days
Hazy Days Walking down a lane, The incessant rain shrouds me. Pale moon of October, hiding in the dark, Nymphs of the night dash across a misty sea. A paradise ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Purple Memories
Purple Memories Blue skies pass by and fade, The day sets peacefully. Echoing in the heavens, Prayers turn into stars. Sailing across an ocean of danger, Far away from my ...
Dec 4, 2007 -
Re: Discordant
Thanks for reviewing! :oops: O yeah, I think I double-posted this.
Nov 24, 2007 -
Re: Discordant
Discordant I'm chained and bound by oblivion, Locked inside a cage of confusion. Angels of death swarm above my head, Darkness blocks away happy faces. Blue skies end up in ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: The Volcano
:D OK, thanks for reviewing!
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: The Volcano
The Volcano Listen to her angry roar, Echoing from a fiery hell's door. She blows her trumpet, Sending a smoke of fury into the air. Pieces of her burning heart ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: In the Night, Under the Moon
In the Night, Under the Moon In the night, under the moon, The stars in the sky shine out and bloom. Fireflies dance a glimmering polka, Water lilies row their ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Land Between the Rivers
O...that's kinda true anyway... Well, thanks for reviewing! :)
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Sunsets and Sorrows
Wow. I really like this piece. It's beautiful and very emotive. Keep up the good work!
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Heart of the Desert
Heart of the Desert A wind blows by, carrying a burden of myths, In the heavens above, a star falls into the abyss. Walking along the dunes of history, Unfolding ...
Nov 13, 2007 -
Re: Land Between the Rivers
Land Between the Rivers Come with me to the land between the rivers, The sandstorm blows a tale of great wonders. Once an endless battlefield, now and always be, A ...
Nov 12, 2007 -
Re: Raining Delusions
Raining Delusions Drops of innocence envelope me in a shower, Silver clouds skip merrily over a hill of paper flowers. Hear the wind sing, it leaves a trail of destruction, ...
Nov 11, 2007 -
Re: Holding Onto Hope
Holding Onto Hope Running endlessly in a hallway of confusion, Seeking answers fading into unconsciousness. The sun smiles today, hailing down brightness, But I'm drifting into a dark illusion. A ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Faraway Winter
Faraway Winter Walking along a path painted with white, In the distance, there shines a light... Snowflakes rain down a joyful dance, Touching down onto the palm of my hand. ...
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: No Ceiling
Great poem. Good imagery and structure. I wish the world was really like what you wrote in your poem... :)
Nov 9, 2007
