Lil_Pau

Exodus I step in ravishing snow, hugging myself to sleep under a withered tree's glow. Children chatter and play, They dream of imaginary places And forget about the coming end ...

Google (hee) I was looking for a site where I could post my work & also interact with others, so I found YWS.

Wow. This was really a good piece. It made me shiver slightly, but at the same time, it was nice. Good job.

This is beautiful. It has this warm atmosphere around it. You've got a good way with expressing feelings. Keep up!

This is a good piece of work! When I first viewed it, it caught my interest straighaway. And that's what a good poem needs! Keep up the good work!

Hey, this is well done! The rhymes were very fun and that made it a good read. Keep it up! :D

If I Were The Fairest ( Chosen sin: Envy ) I dress on the endless chains of roses, dragged out from Hades's deepest chasm. I will trample your dreams of ...

I'm not an avid manga reader, I prefer anime. ^^ Favourite anime(s): Fate/Stay Night, Death Note, Rozen Maiden, Shakugan no Shana, Code Geass, the Gundam series, Evangelion, Cowboy Bebop and ...

O...I liked the first part, but the second part...well...for me, it sounded really 'harsh' in comparison to the first. I mean...the end wasn't really suitable, it sounded a little 'off'. ...

Heart Of The Fire by Lil_Pau Inspired by photo number #2 ________________________________________________ The eye of the fire is stirring- It swirls beneath my unsteady feet Like autumn leaves in the ...

I don't know about you guys, but Bjork and Ozzy Osbourne creep me out...(no offence to the fans)

That's insane! No one in their right mind would want to sit on a toilet for 2 years! :shock: :shock:

Oh my, this is such an amazing piece of work! Has some imagery & the emotions were portrayed really well! This is actually the first time I've come across a ...

I agree with was very nice to read, it reminds me of a song written by the Beatles (something like that), but if you were to classify it as a ...

Essence Hush, my little one, Let me tell you the story of the sun~ With its glorious rays And tremendous power, It's a god of light in this realm~ You ...