Lil_Pau

S.O.S - Rihanna

Fritzl is definitely mad. His picture even gives me the creeps. I don't understand why people could do something like this. I feel so sorry for the daughter and children...its ...

Yes, very good job. This poem reminds me of standing in a serene forest (for some reason). Keep up! :)

This poem is nice, good work, but I thought it was kinda 'overdone' and cliched.

Johnny Hawthorn (this suddenly came to mind) A skinny girl around 5 ft tall, silver-blond hair and pale skin. Timid, shy, innocent and curious. Wears a white dress. She has ...

Faith A fleur-de-lys illuminates above, as the light of the rising day shines through the windowpanes. The doves spread their wings, flying across a field of lilies. I kneel down, ...

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Yes, I enjoyed this! It has good imagery. I have nothing else to say, except: Keep up the good work! :)

Under The Twilight The wind carries forth, singing wheezily in the air. Falling blossoms shed their petals and vanish into the sunlight. The sea bops up and down while the ...

Such a sad and yes, powerful poem. It's very nice.

A short but beautiful poem. It had a lot of imagery, like Conrad Rice (& others) had mentioned. Good work! :)

Oh my, this is really sad! Very nice and unique, I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! :)

This is a good read. I pictured the sun while reading this. Good job!

Light At The Edge Of The World The burning wind is a rising facade, it sends my troubled eyes into struggle. While my worn-out feet trudge onto a weary pathway, ...

Cynical World We stand in a withering field, littered with our broken dreams. The words that you speak are blinded by the feeling of guilt. The summer-blue skies fade away, ...