Lil_Pau

Deepest Memories The wind was so cheerful, brushing happily against our faces. The skies were so blue, they never turned solemn and sad. Birds sing out their hearts, while flying ...

Hey, this is very nice! It needs a little improvement, but overall it was good. Reminds me a bit of Alice in Wonderland...:) Keep up! :)

OK, I'll bear that in mind. :) Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :D

Zero ~A New Era~ The dawn of the new era strikes, raising its curtains to a new sun. I feel its energy sparking through my veins, flowing in the cells ...

This is really beautiful. Great job.

This is a nice and emotional piece, but as ChernobyllyInclined said, it was not so original and uninteresting. Try putting more imagery into it, like for example, adding some metaphors. ...

This poem was fantastically done! I loved the imagery. But there are some points that you need to improve, though (Vernon has already explained everything, so I won't say more). ...

Skies The rain falls onto the stone pavement, holding me with its wet, cold fingertips. Under the hidden sunlight, I try to hold my falling tears, showering my worn-out feet. ...

This was well...just OK. Neither bad nor good, just OK. It needs some improvement there. As Dr. Jamie Bondage said, it really didn't flow well. Also, try not to repeat ...

One thing I didn't really like about this poem was its kinda threw me off. But I think it's a great piece of work, it's very unique and original. It ...

I don't know what to say...well, it was short and nice, but if expanded a bit, I think it could be better.

This is such an enjoyable piece. I love the way the poem flows. Keep up! :)

Aww! I love this! It's so...cute! :) Oh dear, i don't know what else to say...good work!! :)

I liked this, it has a point. But I think the stanzas were kinda 'messed up'. Nevertheless, it's still good. :)

Very nice. It's kinda rare to find a poem about fairies. :) It needs some improving, but it's still a piece of good work! Keep up! :)