Lil_Pau

Fairytale Skies The ocean is clouded with white birds like bright little angels, flying here and there. The slow ripples that brush my bare feet are soothing, warm touches. The ...

I can't believe you took only five minutes! Your works are all very good, I can't even draw like that. I like the Mini Cooper the most. ^^

Wow, this was really cute. It made me smile. A good piece of art to welcome Halloween! ^_-

I feel so sorry for you. :( *Hugs* I hope that everything will turn out well for you, and don't give up on whatever you do. Keep wishing for the ...

For me, the poem was just OK. I feel the emotions you're trying to convey but your poem was a bit cliched and dull. You could try using some metaphors ...

Your idea was good, but I have to agree that the rhyming was terribly forced. It ruined the poem's flow and content, and when I read it, it was like ...

This poem was really good, especially the first stanza. However, the way you ended the poem did not suit well for me. It was really abrupt and I felt that ...

Nice! I love the deer.

Hey, nice work!

It's really disrespectful. People should respect each other, no matter whatever race, religion or background they come from.

Welcome to YWS! OK, to tell the truth, I really liked this poem. It has a lot of imagery and emotions in it. The rhyme was just OK for me, ...

Nice poem, but the meaning wasn't really clear to me. I also agree that if it was longer, it would have been better. Oh well... "I leave one on your ...

Hey, I have to agree that it sounds more like a song. About the first line "So many pity lives", were you going to mean "So many pitiful lives"? Overall, ...

Masquerade In the fleet of people and places, I am just a mere spot. But the veil of darkness that has been donned on my face has blossomed into an ...

This is simply amazing. It's really wonderful and beautiful, and has a lot of good imagery. I can't see any errors in this poem. The flow was great, the description ...