Lil_Pau

Hi there! I'd like to review your poem today. :) I think that you have a pretty good concept, but when you put it to words, it doesn't really work ...

I really felt the sadness in this poem, although I don't know much of the Columbine shootings (I'll do research on it when I'm done with reviewing). The emotion you ...

Hi there Rosey! I'd like a review on my poem, Resonance Of Tears. Link: I just want to know if there is anything I can improve. Thanks!

Sometimes I get this urge to write a poem, and I'll try to find any inspiration for it. Most of my motivation comes from music or anything happening around me. ...

This was really funny. I liked the 3rd part. A really good Death Note Parody. I can't think of anything else to say. Good job, keep it up! :D Can't ...

This wasn't bad at all. I think you did an OK job. The problems: Punctuation: Please put this. Most people think that they aren't necessary for a poem, but yes, ...

Wow, I really liked this. It was done in a unique way. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on this topic. Anyway, the only problems were: Punctuation: ...

This wasn't terrible at all! It was really a nice read. I like the message conveyed throughout the poem. The rhyming was a little awkward though. Remember, poems don't need ...

Wow, did you really do this? I cannot really find any fault with it. The language, the depth, the flow, the imagery...all were really good. It's really rare to have ...

Resonance Of Tears Far in the distance, a tear falls. Its ripples violently slashes the skies, and allows its sound to break the day. Such is the power of sadness. ...

I don't really like it as well. Last year, since it was getting "all-the-rage," I bought the books and I wanted to see how was it like. And it greatly ...

Thanks for the comments; I didn't really expect to get 2nd place. ^^

Wow, this is a very interesting dream. It's one dreamland that I would one to visit. XD Anyway, back to the poem.... I thought that it was really good! I ...

*applauds* Cool work there. I love the colours and the guy's pose. Makes him look cool too. ^^ Good work, keep it up! :)

Ha, this was really a good one. Really funny. ^^ OK...about the poem...hmm... When I read it, I noticed it was written in a fast pace. Maybe it's just me, ...