Lil_Pau

Hiya! I thought that this poem was really nice and enjoyable, with some good imagery. It also flowed pretty well. However, I do agree with CK Lynn about the "two ...

OK, thanks for the advice and reviews, I'll keep them in mind. ^^

Wow. Great job! I like the details on the characters' outfits and their pose. I kinda agree with the 'broken neck' thing, but about the hands, I think you did ...

Wow. This is really one amazing poem. I cannot find any fault with it. I liked the way you described the stages of the tree's growth, and you did it ...

Destination As I walk through the wide, sweltering desert, Warm, dry winds whisper into my eyes. The sun is furious on my back, Leaving my solemn shadow tailing behind me. ...

Ehm...for what? :D

Pat Buchanan.

Oooh! Neat job! ^^

I picked Jasmine, but I would've picked her, Mulan and Ariel. ^^

Hi there! I thought that this poem had really good imagery, but I didn't get what you were trying to convey. I also have to agree with bubblewrapped about you ...

That was a really funny poem. So far, I didn't find any fault with it. The rhymes were OK, the way you composed it was really 'neat' and it ended ...

Thank you so much for the review, Rosey! I really appreciate it! :D

Hi Rosey! I'd like a review on my 1st chapter of my ongoing story, Blessings, in the Other Fiction section. Link: Thanks! :D

I haven't watched it yet, but from the posters and commercials, it doesn't look good. =_=

*jaw drops* Oh-my-God. For me, the Jonas Brothers are like...aaargh, I can't stand them, and Twilight? One of the worst books I've read. So, it sounds pretty nightmarish for me.