Lil_Pau

Eddie/Mason/Johnny A 16-year-old girl who loves to skateboard and cause trouble. Ties her hair in pigtails and dyes a part of her hair pink. Always wears anything of punk fashion. ...

Although this is one of those 'love poems' that I usually am tired of, I thought that you did a really good job. Your choice of words made it really ...

Hey there! I really liked this poem. It sounded 'complete.' You managed to use many colourful words and at the same time, emphasize the point. However... You are unique, your ...

Hiya! Can you please review my poem here? Thanks! :)

Vestige A dark crimson tinge is glimmering at the end of the horizon, reflected back by the puddles of tears that had been shed. The wind laments terribly, crashing down ...

If passers-by approach me, I'll say, "I'm fine!" What would you do if you found spider eggs in your hair? :D

Elarenne - A tall, young woman of 17-20 years. Has long, silky light brown hair and bright green eyes. Is quite athletic and a fast runner. Is popular around her ...

Oooh! I've never tried anything like this, but it sounds fun! I'll try to come up with something...

Haha I do that most of the time. ^^ For me, I'd use Japanese songs (especially the ones from anime) because sometimes they suit the surroundings and themes of the ...

This is so sickening. It's just...terrible. :( I mean...it's FIVE children!

Oh my. I thought this poem was very beautiful. I loved your choice of words, the imagery and I liked the fact that it was short. It's one really cute ...

Wow. From the moment I read this, I was immediately struck dumb. I couldn't find any fault with it. The imagery and description were really wonderful. It also flowed really ...

Ahaha. I liked this. It was very unique and well done. Short, but nice. ^^ Anyway, the line: "Order While for knowledge yearning" What do you mean by 'order while?' ...

Hi there! ^^ This poem simply blew me away. I was caught up in your wonderful use of language and the great rhythm in it. And yet, it flows so ...

Hi there! I'd like to review your poem. ^^ One mistake I noticed in the first stanza: The Letter The letter; she's been waiting Days, upon days, upon days Hope ...