Lil_Pau

Hiya there! *Just a reminder first - before posting any piece of work, you should at least make TWO reviews. YWS rules and regulations. :) So...back to the poem... To ...

I really liked this piece. Like Penelope mentioned above, it was written with nice imagery and for me, it was a mellow read. Just one thing: She rushed through the ...

I know you feel terribly sad about the fact that your love of your life is moving far away, but I have to agree with bubblewrapped's view. It's a typical ...

Wow! This is one piece that blew me away. I love the rich Shakespearean language and the poem's structure. As most of everyone had said above, this was brilliantly written. ...

Hi there! Could you review a poem of mine? It's written for a contest and I just want to know if there's anything to correct. Link: Thanks! :D

For angels-symphony's "Symphony of Colors" contest. Symphony Of Hope Like a phoenix, it soars into the sky, a radiant, fiery comet in the field of space. Wings spread wide and ...

Hi there! Dancing in eternity, Drowning in seretiny, Don't you mean "drowning in serenity?" Falling into open minded dreams. Sunless days, Moonless nights, Breaking dawn with frightened screams. Hours

It's rather short, but I liked the message you were trying to convey. I think you should try to improve the ending, maybe extend it, because just putting "somewhat misplaced" ...

Wow, Knightly, you did great with this! I love the imagery, the choice of words and the flow. I liked the way the poem started, from beginning to end, and ...

Hey there! I thought this poem was well-written and you conveyed the message well. For these lines: (to which, as children do, you'll go, tomorrow and for some years yet.) ...

Nice job with this! You did quite well with the imagery and the flow of the poem. I liked the last stanza the most. There's only one thing that I ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone! (I didn't expect so many. ^^)

Halo A lament echoes. Its waves surge across the walls of my chest, shading my shadow with a darker hue. I realize, it is my own voice crying out, hands ...

Congrats to you, Evi! ^^

Personally, I don't think so. Books are an important part of life - they provide the base for our ideas, thinking, imagination, and so on. It provides an open door ...